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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How tangled I am In this lovers web My penalty for Willingly assuming the pose You have seized this opportunity To use me To structure your ego You demonstrate your intentions Our love to be concealed We tamper with fate You will not be jilted You play me like a piano I act on each string I pay for each lesson How tangled am I In this lovers web |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whoo hoo, can I relate..."You play me like a piano" Love it, love the analogies "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb....just ended a relationship like that. Felt like a puppet in an N'Sync video. Good work....enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted but don't know why. (Just Joking) love you girl. we all feel this way times in our lives. i don't think you should let yourself get played anymore. we all love you and hope to see you on a better path. and i do feel that your a great person just by the words you write. i do so love your work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted but don't know why. (Just Joking) so sorry but there were five postings of the one above this and i could not let you read the same thing over and over so i edited four of them for you. please let me know if you forgive me. < !signature--> I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- [This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
sooooooo sssoooorrrrrrrryyyy. i guess the 2000 bug kicked in. < !signature--> I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- [This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
sorry five turned out the same and i can't let your read the same thing over and over so sorry< !signature--> I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- [This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
so sorry about all of these it would not go through so i keep trying and it posted it five times so sorry.< !signature--> I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- [This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a brilliant sticky image. You decribe so well how we can get trapped by circumstance. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
thanks everyone!! I had to tell Jerimiah, the same thing happenned to me the other day, I posted numerous times to someone, gosh darn web...but its ok, we are just trying to get our replies in, which my web will not always cooperate!!!! |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I can relate to this so well. I am involved in a situation that just screams what you wrote, it is almost like you know me. Dee |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! This poem is superb!  You play me like a piano I act on each string I pay for each lesson Hmm... good expression! I liked how you put this... and how true sometimes! Really enjoyed this poem of yours |
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