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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
four in the morning whispers to me it is dark where you are your head full of tangled dreams of me? I still love you I hope you do think of my broken angel wings sometimes I hope that in quiet moments I surface from the dark waters of your soul I hope that you miss me just a little sometimes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Jennie, I'm sure he does think of you, I truly believe it is rare for someone who truly loved you to ever be forgotten. Nice poem, and familiar feeling. So hard to let go. Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jennie....I broke off a romance some time ago....it just wasn't right for either of us...and breaking it off was the right thing to do. But I still have dreams of her...and I still think of her. So, yes....those 4am dreams still haunt me. Would I ever go back to her....No. My reasons have not changed. But she would send me this poem of yours if she ever read it. Well done....Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well this is another great piece from you. enjoyed it very much and i hope that he does miss you a little from time to time and when it count the most. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
oh definitely...I know it would never work w/this guy after everything that happened, yet I still hope he remembers the good...thanx everyone for the replies!!! "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
What you have expressed so well is the innate desire to be remembered! And the intrinsic goodness of a soul which forgives one who knows not what he does.. Very Nice Deepak Menon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I do believe in my heart that we are thought of by loved ones now gone from our lives. Yet I have had those thoughts myself. Im sure you are not forgotten. I like this poem very much!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Who could not my dear, who could not! Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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