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Dark Poetry #2

banishment

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-02 07:33 AM

surrendering to
the shards of love
he cries
hot rain
in ebony light

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-07-02 08:56 AM

Uta...This poem created such imagery in my mind (some of which I will have to send to you in an e-mail....too steamy here). It's so short one can repeat it several times...and receive different imagery with each repetition. Very nice....Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-07-02 02:28 PM

yes very many points to look at nice to see a another great poem from you so i know your not loseing yourself. cause i'm going crazy LOL. no i've been there from years. enjoyed the read very much so do keep it up my friend and do check your email.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-07-03 08:42 PM

lotharingia, this makes me want to strive harder to shorten my poems, and get more out of them, thank you for inspiring me.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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