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Chasing Shadows |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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One more exercise in misery and I am done for awhile.  Chasing Shadows Today I bathe in shadows, the sun obscured from view. Slipping into darkness all for the lack of you. A longing in my heart consumes my day with pain. The hole of doubt looms larger, like an incomplete quatrain. What causes me to want you when you're not free to be with me? You did it, brought me to this space, now all I feel is need. Logic fails me daily, though I know I waste my love. My heart cares not to listen, I still feel you are the one. I'm waiting now, for your next move, not sure what you will do. It's too late now to stop this train, it has to go on through... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a very good read i enjoyed it much as i do all your work and i'm happy to be the first one to reply to this one of yours thanks for posting it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!!! You hit home with this one! So well do I know this feeling. I must say waiting is the WORST part. Very well written Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Terrific poem! Yeah, waiting is never good is it? And then the thoughts go round and round and round... and even more impatience sets in. Loved reading it! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Excellent title!! It is so hard to be in that place, very emotional my friend, wish I could help to change things....keep writing, I like how you expressed the feelings |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes I wrote of a train to, don't even remember what one it was, it dosen't matter now. and I know what you are going through. hang in there kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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