Dark Poetry #2 |
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No Love |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
There is no love for me today, your life has other plans I'm so afraid you'll go away and leave me where I stand. Alone again, I wonder why it has to be this way. It hurts so much I want to cry. Please take away this day. I know next week you will be back, at least I think you will. Then my heart will be on track, again I'll be fulfilled. You're pulled away by her right now. I'm left alone to mourn. My eyes are dead, my head is bowed. I sit here so forlorn. I guess it's wrong to want you though you mean so much to me. There's just nothing I can do, when your face is all I see. So here I am, I sit and wait for the tomorrow I hope will be. And though I fear it could be too late, someday we'll both be free. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
One never knows Catalina, try hard to focus on some wonderful times ahead, because I know there will be some for you. Im holding your hand through this!! (((hugs))) Deborah1, I really enjoyed the poem....I just know that your sad |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...very hard reading this. Hang in there, times will be better for you I know it. Don't give up. ![]() |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
A very compelling read. Nice work. Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a very wonderful read enjoyed it much and as always hope things start looking better for you. hang in there and keep writing. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra....great poem. Loved the structure and words. As for the content.....sounds like you are really carrying a torch for this guy, but he's not yours to have at this point. Frustrating.... Hardrock |
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