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A Woman's Work... |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Rode me hard, Put me away wet. Disease has set in, And now I'm spent. No hearty oats to feed on, No wool blanket to heat. Still and still, I must find sleep. Needed in the morn, More loads on me they heap. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
(Kynder...we gotta stop meeting like this...people are starting to talk) I read this several times....one read made me think of my former job and how they treated me. The other read made me think of relationships with people...and how I was just a beast of burden for all their excess baggage they brought into the relationship. And then I remembered the poem you wrote called Manipulation and I thought, "...and the beast shall rise up out of forests and fields and overcome them". Amazing the thoughts I get when reading your words here.....Hardrock. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
From early dawn to setting sun, A woman's work is never done. Those who use and abuse us in this way are no more than a burden to us and mankind. I too have felt used this way, likened to a work mule or soemthing. Great work hon  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Whip!!!! Slash!!!!!!! Crack!!!!!!!! Gitte-up Kynder!!!!!!!! HHHHHeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaa, Darn woman, thinks she can take a break, Spit!! splat!! Made for this kinda work ant she? Kynder? Why you houldin that there gun??? Love it kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
and only cuz i love ya, joel, can you even speak to me like that!!! thank you for reading and hearing me anyway!!! onery booger ain't ya?? kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Knyder Knyder Knyder what i'm i going to do with you? your so mean LoL no your a great person and with that comes great poems that i always long to read so just shoot them out for me to read and how about an email oppss. it my turn to email you eeeeeeeeeeeeeee. love Jaybean say do you need a hit man I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This one speaks to alot of people Im sure! I loved it very original |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
OUCH, you need a union and to go on strike or if this is the way some people are treating you then strike back. a great poem, yes I can well relate to this. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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