And friend from across the seas and another land

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Dark Poetry #2

And friend from across the seas and another land

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

0 posted 2000-06-30 02:41 PM

GREETINGS - A POEM

I heard the voice from a lover’s heart
I knew you were a lover right at the start
Of the moment in time when you came to me
Speaking from across the vast unknown sea

And the tenderness of your soul of smiles
Coupled with your captivating wiles
Captured an otherwise elusive being from afar
By brightening his way like a wandering star

And the friendship that arose out of the blue
Surpassed anything we hitherto knew
With shades of a thousand nuances of thought
Weaving a fabric which has successfully caught

The agony and the ecstasy of all our years
Filled our hearts with joy, wiped away our tears
So friend from across the seas and another land
I offer you in friendship this caring hand.

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-06-30 02:49 PM

Very well written, I enjoyed this one!I think an excellent way to express yourself. Keep going!!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-07-01 12:06 PM

enjoyed this read very very much and i hope to see more from you real soon. and keep your great work coming.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-07-01 07:30 AM

*sigh* Oh, this is such a beautiful poem

Thank you for the read

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

4 posted 2000-07-01 09:22 AM

I liked this one too Demon. Good luck with the friendship.

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-07-01 06:53 PM

Wow this was a great poem, except for the last verse it could be in a card or whatever!
It is wonderful to send out these feelings across the spanse of space, ocean and time!
Good work

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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