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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I didn't mean it, you know. not entirely. I said I was through. Your evasive affection finally pushed me away. I didn't mean it when I said the love was gone. I just wanted it to be (you are so hard to love). Your demands wore me out, I had to go. I thought it was true, I could go on just fine without you. But you see, I didn't mean it. You took it out of context. You were supposed to beg me to stay... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Ahhhh.....the games we play at love. Very nicely done, Cat. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes we men see it in black and white, it's the nature of the beast. Ladies have you noticed that hints just don't work... love the poem kid not the hurt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
oh yes the games we play why can't it just easy. every well done keep it up and your head up to. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh girl, you did it again. you were supposed to beg me to stay...... man i have tried that sooooo many times. and it never worked. i really like the way you use paranthesis to say a whole different thought, but it doesn't disturb the flow nor the message of the poem. very clever, creative and fresh. KEEP IT UP!!!! here is where i beg you to stay so i can read more and more!!!  kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kynder, thanks a lot! Glad you liked it. And yes, I am staying, this is the most fun I have had in a long time. (Isn't that a sad commentary on my love life?) |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I hate to admit how long it took me to say what I mean....and mean what I say, Excellent Job here!!!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Cat,...(can I call you that?) hehe. This poem just makes me shake my head with a grin on my face at the things we do for love. Don't like the pain involved for you,... but it was a great poem, well written. Take care you. *Peace. |
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