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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-06-29 11:50 AM


I touch you through
the screen,
you touch me through
the phone.
We touch eachother
with our minds.
Virtual reality.
Nothing virtuous
about it...

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-06-29 12:59 PM


Been there , done that also.  Puter relationships are very difficult.  Especially through the hard times in ur life.  Bare with it.... "heck" things might turn in ur directions.  
Keep ur head up and always smile! ( what do they say.... a smile is worth a thousand words)

Great poem too!!  

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
2 posted 2000-06-29 01:18 PM


Hmmmm,

I guess so.
I used to do that, but I am now afraid I will catch a virus.
You just never know.

LarBear

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-06-29 02:30 PM


So true, so true Cat....'puter romances are so distant, cold, the only warmth being from the breezes blown off your CPU.  Another fine work from the Cat.   Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-29 11:58 PM


oh yes the way you express things is so great i love your work and read all of it so do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)
5 posted 2001-11-30 02:14 PM


very well written
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-11-30 03:26 PM


yes, this is well, true in many cases ....

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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