Dark Poetry #2 |
The Glock |
Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sitting in silent darkness smoke curling from my cigarette the glow of ash reflecting off the rain flecked window panes. Wanting to wonder, not wanting to know And as I sit there wondering, And stare at the silent clock. I jack another bullet, Into the chamber of my Glock. What now…….what now my love? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, so powerful, and kind of scary. Be careful with that thing, ok? |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes baby now what. hahahaha love it. but hell guy is it for her or you.? HHHHOOOOOWWWWWLLLLLLLing Great. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work here to as always. kind of a different format HEHEHE I wonder? we'll any like the idea and its just another great poem from you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
That was the whole idea behind the poem Joel.....you never really know who it's for. JJ.....yeah, kind of a different format for me. I used to write free-form years ago, but stopped. The forum inspired me to try again......this is my first in about 20 years. Thank you both...and to all of you for your encouragement and support. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great Job Hardrock I have rubbed my husbands glock. and have thought about using on me but never on him. I dont know who was going to get here but your poem was great And dont worry I would never have the guts to use it Im scared of guns Blue |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Intense, very! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Debbie Lindsey New Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 3 |
Oh Marvin! How well I know that Glock! |
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