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**Tammy** Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 14 |
One and one alone there for we die but we die alone pushed out the nest like a baby bird not wanted at all so don't look back don't look back at all we die alone |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is sad but true, Tammy. When it boils down to it, we are always alone, for no one can see into our soul. But do you want them to  No, seriously, I was worried by the line "not wanted at all". Do you mean that you feel that our lives seem meaningless? Everything does seem so senseless when you think about it, but we should look at the beauty of the world and try to make the most of the time we have to enjoy it. Or do you mean that you personally don't feel wanted? This is a terrible feeling, but a self doubt that befalls many of us, I think. Pets can help BTW!  Look after yourself! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Everyone is wanted by someone. Time brings us all together. You are wanted here in Dark Passions.....to help yourself and others to understand. Nicely put, Tammy. Thanks.....Hardrock |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
Remember, baby birds are pushed from the nest for their own good. They must learn the realities of life quite early. Coming from me, It's kind of hard to say something like that, especially since I have felt so alone and rejected lately. I guess we all know better, but feelings tend to have a life of their own. The question is will we let them get the best of us. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i'm at this crossroad with you. ever sense i lost my true love i feel so lifeless and depressed and i've felt this way for about three years now. and i still have'nt found the light. so i'm with you and will help you out the best that i can. well enjoyed the read and it is a great poem. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Yes we die alone, but I like me so Im not scarded to go with me, but I will also have all my memeries that I have collected good and bad, the ones that made me, me. great poem. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Yes, we die alone. We should not live alone as well. You have friends here. Nice work. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kethry comes up and gives **Tammy** a huge bear hug. Can you feel it. Baby birds are pushed from the nest to learn how to fly and the parents flies underneath them to catch them when they fall. Hope passions helps you to fly. be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Great job! I really felt the pain in this one! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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