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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-08-06 07:44 PM


A yearning heart,
Searching for something unobtainable,
True love, ever lasting love,
The whole idea questionable.

Some have it and they are all too few,
Am I destined to walk this Earth alone,
Simply cos I haven't found you?
Do you even exist?

A love knowing no bounds,
A love that anyone would envy,
No anger, jealousy and the like,
Simply put - you a part of me and I part of you..

I know it's out there,
I've tasted glimpses before,
But when will he find me,
When will he knock on my door?

A love so overwhelming,
Even minutes apart is torture,
Is happiness such as that,
Awaiting me?

I'm scared it isn't,
Scared I'm waiting for something,
I'm not meant to have,
Perhaps for me the bell won't ring.

Scary to think this way,
That my very existance stands unfulfilled,
Even scarier to think I may have already met him,
And my heart was fooled!!!



I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-08-06 07:48 PM


~Isis,...each time I click on your work to read you, I know that somehow your words will reach deep and be so full of emotion. I hear your thoughts,...echoing loud and clear here. I feel for you. And also believe that yes,...someone is out there like this for you,...it's a must,...you deserve it. Great expression of these scary thoughts and questions. Take care you. *Peace.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-08-06 07:51 PM


I'm ok hon thanks for the concern, just thoughts that run through the head, is it out there?  Or did I miss it already??????
Glad you can relate and glad you like my maniacle thoughts..  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-08-06 08:08 PM


Isis, I feel this exact way. I can understand and empathize with every bit of this. Take care, and keep writing.
Luv ya
Sandra

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-08-06 08:16 PM


Thanks Cat!!  And hon don't fear I'd never stop writing or the best part of me would die!! LOL  Glad you liked it!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



jerralynne
Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 11

5 posted 2000-08-07 02:30 AM


your words echo my thoughts ~ a life lived without love is . . . what?  & have i simply screwed up what was supposed to be?  is there such a thing as right person wrong time?  why is it that fear & love are all too often intertwined?  ~ jerralynne
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-08-07 03:12 AM


The title was perfect Isis along with the poem. That question of is there more?, Have we settled for less? and what may we have missed, or may never have. Im sure you will touch alot of us here at DP with this one. Just so well done, so thought provoking for sure!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-08-07 09:20 AM


This is something I can relate to especiallly when I'm tired or lonely. Sometimes even finding the right pone doesn't amke for the happy ever after. Thank you for sharing this thought.
Be well (you and Dylan both)
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

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