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Walking Away |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i think of him too much...btw his name is mike. ~Walking Away~ I tried to walk away from love tonight. He pulled it away just to spite. I love him to the breaking point. He loves me not, for life. I love him til my dying point. He hates me with such strife. I faltered with my actions, he lost all attraction. I die with every breath, this love has brought my death. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
too sad for one who is probably young (if he makes you that unhappy)....but you expressed yourself well ~~softly Maureen |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
young or not, saddness is saddness, and you've expressed it beautifully.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i may seem young but i've gone through more than one life of lose ~The Author~ i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i just felt the urge to pull this up because i was a little upset for ebing called young... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nik if you are not young (remember some of us are crones lol) then this poem is not sad it is tragedy. Although beautifully expressed tragedy, it is tragedy none the less. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Oh wow! This one is painful! If this guy dosen't love you, don't waste your time on him! I know that sounds difficult, but it's the right thing to do. Find someone who appreciates you! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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