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Forgetting Your Dreams
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Forgetting Your Dreams |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
When the day is over turn on the light have another pill it will be alright breath the line and go alnight Forget your problems your dreams and things dancing on clouds, I'm dying she sings You don't look pretty when you don't smile fake it, laugh, make it last awhile Who stole my mind, who took it away coming down and wasting my day. (I need everyone to know that I am not sad anymore, just lonely now, I am finding it hard to trust anyone. I wrote these poems a while ago, I have never written poetry before, when I saw this site I thought someone should see them, so thankyou all for your concern, I really love it here it really has filled a void in my life, thankyou) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
glad to know your happy wish i could say the same. but as for your poem i really love it and i hope you say part of the family and keep poetry part of your life. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
your poetry is beautiful...i know what you mean about filling a void, i was never able to show anyone my poetry, but if feels good to have someone read and accept your work, and even more, actually like it... keep up the good work!!  -if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am glad you are ok now too. I'm also lonely. Life can be a challenge,especially I think for our kind of people, who are sensitive and romantic. It's so easy to be unfulfilled when your dreams are so big. Catalinamoon |
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