Dark Poetry #2 |
When I am Gone !! |
naynay Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13whitewright tx usa |
When I Am Gone !! When I am gone relase me and let me go I have so many things to see and so You must'nt lie to your self to me With tears b happy we had so many Beautiful years I give to you my love you can only Guess how much you gave to me in Happiness I thank you for the Love you each have shown but now It's time I travel on - Alone So greave for me while if you must Then let your heart be comforted By trust it's only for a while that We must part so bless the memories Within your heart I wont be far a way for life gose On so if you need me call and I will Come though you can not see me nor touch Me I will be near and if you listen Within your heart you will Hear all my love around you soft and Clear and then when you must come this Way alone I will great you with a smile And say WELCOME HOME BY candy williams note their's a story behind this poem and if you would like to know it u can look for my poem in Critical Analynsis or u can e-mail me if u like [This message has been edited by naynay (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem i love it and this seem how i felt when the love of my life died. so thank for bringging back the memories. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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naynay Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13whitewright tx usa |
To all who read this poem it is not ment to hurt you in anyway so please do not feel like it was I had Jst wonted to let others know how I felt when someone close had passed on. [This message has been edited by naynay (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
beautiful... death is a very hard thing to deal with but its a part of life we all must accept... hopefully something better awaits us all. -if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.- |
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