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Computer Love |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I wish I knew your face, for I dream of you every night. I wish I could touch your soft skin, and kiss you sweet lips. I wish I could look into your eyes, and see deep down into your soul. I wish you would hold me in your strong arms, day and night. Allas, you are but words on a screen. Nothing more than a profile. -if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow, how sweet. But dreams do sometimes come true ... Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh good, its not just me..LOL. Hey I wrote one alone the same lines last week, its a strange situation isn't it? Great poem. Catalinamoon |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!! sometimes i swear people think you should put lock stock and barrel in the words they type so well. be it an email, a chat or a poem posted here. once again THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! excellent work. i feel ya hon. i really do. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very lovely poem. I think most of us have felt this love for someone over the internet. We get to see their soul first and thats a wonderful thing. Just because we have not met them in person, doesnt mean the feelings can not be real. Once again lovely poem. Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This IS such a sweet piece you've written. Sometimes it CAN be more than a profile...and sometimes dreams DO come true...just be careful 'eh? Lovely, lovely work. Can tell it comes straight from within...makes it great. Take care. *Peace. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Ok join the club! LOL I'm gonna have to e-mail this to my friend, she has been begging me to write her a poem about computer love. Thank you for doing it instead! And a good job too. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
That is so cool, I always go to sleep giggling about some of my chat sessions, I loved you poem everybody here must relate. I haven't found love yet, I don't even trust the internet to be real, except in here. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well this is great but i really don't talk to people on the internet except the one's in here and my true love is dead so i have no feeling of this except maybe the way i love you people. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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