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Dark Poetry #2

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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-28 01:55 AM

She,
She with the charming blue eyes,
and the golden brown tan,
She,
She will snatch your soul,
and hang it as a trophy on her ghostly wall,
She,
She will come prancing in the night,
and steal your faith,
She,
She is the Demoness,
and Satan's apprentice,
She,
She will rob you blind of your glory,
and all that comes with it,
She,
She is evil itself,
and nothing will stop her.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-28 02:14 AM

love the idea and its true evil can never be stoped. someone will always hold it in their soul. great read.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-28 11:33 AM

At first I thought this was going to be a love poem, but I was wrong. I love the way you contrast the beauty of your demon's appearance with her nature. If only we could always remember that appearances can deceive!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

3 posted 2000-06-29 03:14 AM

great read...i didn't expect it to be so dark, but it turned out really cool

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