Dark Poetry #2 |
Lonely Love |
LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
All alone, nothing to do, It is lonely here without you. The candle light is burning low, Love songs on the radio. Promises, it all fell through, Now everything is in black and blue. The colors faded with the night, The star we used to wish upon Some how lost the light. Thoughts of you filled my mind, Loving you was also kind. As I lay awake tonight, In my heart, I'll miss the arms That held me tight. But in the end words can be deceiving, And now only seeing is believing The dream of us together Looking into each others eyes Knowing the pain that may last forever The hurt that makes tears slowly cry Could we love one another? In secret or in thought If in thought, I love you and no other If in secret, I will love you like no other. All Alone and nothing to do, These are the thoughts I have of you. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwwww now this was beautiful. So many times I have loved someone in thought only. Its not the best way to do things, yet its better than nothing. Very nice poem!! Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
yes, what a lovely poem. Brought tears to my eyes! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes truely a lovely poem. great expression so please do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
this is soooooo beautiful!!!!! it reminds me of a guy i wish i could forget... keep up the great work!! agian, SOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! -if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.- |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Thanks for the comments. Its nice to know that my words mean differant things to differant people. I guess that what poetry is all about. Love keeps the world smiling. LarBear |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LarBear,...aww, this is wonderfully expressed. Such a longing in this. Great work. Do take care. *Peace. |
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