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Dark Poetry #2

Freedom Challenge

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2000-06-27 08:20 PM

I watch your tear drops fill your eyes
while you struggle not to cry
As he enjoys harrassing and verbally bashing you
I watch him own you and hold you back
He never cuts you any slack.
Sometimes I just want to give him a whack
Drunken and beligerent he does become
I pray you find the courage to fight for your freedom.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-28 12:49 PM

great poem enjoyed it much and i hope who ever this is about finds their freedom.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-06-29 09:00 PM

~BB,...I pray for their courage as well. Goodness,...how'd I miss this one? I probably could fill these pages with my thoughts on being stuck in that sort of situation....*Sigh*, well done poem. Take care. *Peace.

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