Dark Poetry #2 |
For Kenny |
Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
As I speak to you And hear the pain and consern in your voice I relize that you are treating every secound As if it is your last Like you life is ending I know your sick and worried for your life But you are going to live on I am not ready to loose you yet I need you by my side I just got use to you You have to say a little longer No matter what I am not giving you up Without a fight But you have to be strong as well It is your life to I can't do it for you So you have to try -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Very sad poem!!! My heart aches for you both great Job!!!! Blue |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
i hope whatever is wrong makes its self right...your poem is so full of emotion, so truthful, and so beautiful |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is so very sad but a great poem. i hope everything works out for you my friend real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thank you everyone I am glad you liked it. My dad is in the hospital so that who kenny is. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Neala...we never really lose anyone...it's just that sometimes we can't be where they are. Your Dad should be so proud of you.....I am. Hardrock |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful sentiments...and I hope for the best for you and your Dad....James |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hey Thanks I am glad you liked the poem. It is nice to know people care. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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