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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Inside you And outside you There is not one There are two When you smile You swallow bile A viper spits when you kiss But in the end Your only friend is that true sin you hold within Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Hmmmm - The concept of the "True Sin" ! You have a lot to say in these few lines. This is very good poetry! Profound in its complexity AND Profound in its Simplicity! Well Done Deepak |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
Perfect. Excellent title and it really flows. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
what can i say except WONDERFUL WONDERFUL. i loved this piece and i hope to read more like it so please keep it up so i hav esomething to read. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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