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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
In this blackhole of my soul All things are consumed Doomed To live in this padded room Never Again to see the moon Or stars Bared inside this Gated Jar Called The Soul I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
wow, Jeremiah, you have outdone yourself here again. What wonderful, oppressive imagery! I do love your poems! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey, its not all that dark in there, is it? Great image.And thanks for the comments on my poems. Catalinamoon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I think alot about the soul, it has alot of meaning to me, I loved your writing!! Many feelings to explore, here, very good!!! |
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naynay Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13whitewright tx usa |
I liked but can it realy be dark their is alway light at the end of a dark tunal |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oooooooooooooooo jaybean this is really good. what an image you have created here. man i love the way you write. so efficient, so raw and so very powerful. that's my jaybean!!!  kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
This one leaves me thinking. Are our souls left to be in the dark, without light or passion? If without light, we cannot see. If without passion, could this be? Are things of love, things of happiness Doomed? Your poem has left me confused. Your poem has left me consumed. In my own innocence My soul has a more simple way. To love and to hold Yearning to live, yet another day Love keeps the world smiling. LarBear [This message has been edited by LarBear (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Jeremiah,...your writing is so enjoyable to read. Honestly,...you write really well...and all of your poems are these little packed pieces of awesomeness. Great work. Take care. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeremiah, Nice dark writing. Short and to the point. I like it!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jeremiah got soul......and a good hand with the pen. Right on my brother!! Oh, sorry I was having a '60's flashback. Jeremiah...You blossom like a flower before me....your stuff just keeps getting better. Hardrock |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
You are an excelent writer. you have the talent to say ALOT in so few words. I love you work. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Definitly interesting as always....! I like the way you write  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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