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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I was born to this World And one day will be erased So is this that Great Thing They call Fate? I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hmmm, that's one way of putting it, I guess. But don't forget about all the things that happen inbetween  great poem, as usual! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I can't tell you how many times I have asked that question, but never in that form, that was very very good!! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
yes is it, or is it the destiny you are making for yourself?? aaaaaaahhhhhhhh the never ending loop, where do i get off at?? great great inward piece here, jaybean. lovin it like i love you!!!! yaaaaa hoooooo!!!!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Jeremiah, Very simply put. I agree, but dont leave yourself to this fate. Live life, for fate is more than the end, maybe, just maybe, it is the begining. Love makes the world smile LarBear |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeremiah, Fate is just the road that takes us there my friend. We choose the path and fate plots the course accordingly. Great piece.  LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Fate is kind of annoying sometimes, because we don't know what it has in store, and it seems to change all the time. Just when we think we know what's going on, poof, it's different. Nice poem.  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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