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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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(I had to edit this so it was better understood) Friendship Rejected She said to me: "I don’t need a friend, I need marriage, I want a lover, companion, and more. But all you offer is friendship, And I’m tired of playing the whore. You’re really not marriage material, You’ve nothing to offer I need. So just go away and leave me alone, And quit sending me poems I don’t read. What makes you think I would want you? For you I’m just wasting my time. I need to be finding a lover, Not reading your damn silly rhyme. So take your crap back to Dark Passions, And write about "skies of blue", I’m a woman on a mission to find true love, And that mission doesn’t include you." Marv Hardin 06/27/00 [This message has been edited by Hardrock (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!!!! Now this was a very poetic "kiss off!!"  Very nice pattern tho!Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i sit here unable to think of words to respond to these so raw written by you. very good work. i feel kinda dumb. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Hey Hardrock?????? Do tell the story on this one......I am curious! Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...It's part of a puzzle. Go read Your Hearts War....it starts to make some sense then. Thanks....(I just love your name...keep repeating it to myself as I fall asleep at night) Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
My name? Why my name?? Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
WOW! If I read this ' kiss-off' correctly, you just pushed aside a ' friend'.  You are looking for a lover, companion and marriage. Wise and wonderful people have found out that their mate is their 'best friend'! It is wonderful to be friends first and have it develope into just the most precious relationship. Sorry for my 2-cents worth...but friendship is vital in any type of relationship. So I will just say... 'Scuse me please and sign off... Good luck on your hunt,Hardrock. MagnoliaBlue |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
To MagnoliaBlue....just to clarify, I wasn't sending this...this was the message I received. I would never kiss-off anybody....but thanks for your comments. At least it made you think. Hardrock To DkW...your name is like a mantra: Dark Kisses Within, Dark Kisses Within, Dark Kisses Within.....It's a uniquely beautiful name, phonetically pleasing to say, and it evoke images of beauty, sensuality and passion. It beats the h*** out of repeating "Ohmmmmmm, Ohmmmmmmm, Ohmmmmmm" a hundred times. Do I have to pay royalties on using it now.....LOL? Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Hmmmmm alrightyyyyyy then Hardrock I got ur point of view about my name!! LOL And yes please send the payments to www.brokeasHell.com LOL Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hardrock, all I can say is ..stupid girl...If I had ever had a man writing beautiful poems to me, he would still be here with me. I'm sorry you were hurt so much. Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Catalina....you misunderstand...She's not a stupid girl..quite the contrary, she's someone who knows what she wants and needs. I was the one who got in her way along her journey....I presumed too much, assumed too much. I have this urge sometimes to rush in, prop up and try to be "the Saviour" (another great poem here in Dark Passions I might add). So....it was my own doing. As for the hurt.....there is no hurting the Hardrock. "I have my books, my poetry to protect me.....I'm shielded in my lonely room. I touch no one, and no one touches me. I am a rock. I am an island. And a rock feels no pain....and an island never crys." (Simon and Garfunkle) Thanks for all your concern....(secret just for your eyes: You are one of my favorites) Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
hardrock i see your point. i to sometimes seem to mess things up like right now i'm prepareing to move to south carolina over this summer and leave my girl behind its not the most stuipedest of my mistakes but its one of them and my parents to. but its something i feel i have to do to better my life for me. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Ironic isn't it Jeremiah....you are moving to South Carolina...and I'm already here? See how things work in life? Hardrock |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
a woman on a mission can be deadly...but you act like its all your fault...no way Hardrock...we can be cruel and foolish creatures |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Excellent poem. I know how this feels, they are the only ones missing out in this situation my friend... not you. If they are not happy starting with a solid friendship, they will not be so forthcoming with a solid friendship during a relationship I find. Dont give up, great job. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I think this is really sad, as unrequited love always is. A great poem! BTW, I'm not sure I believe you can't be hurt.  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Hardrock, I felt so sad! I loved the poetry, but I hate so know of someone rejecting love?? I think poetry is romantic, so don't ever stop!!! |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Hey Marv! Great work!!! I know the feeling all too well. |
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Debbie Lindsey New Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 3 |
My dear sweet Marvin...That poem rings all too familiar to me. |
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