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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2001-01-04 03:19 PM


Soul Liquid

Streaks of black
with a glimmer
of white
fading,
fading
to beautiful shades
of precious purple
slipping,
slipping
further down into
my drowning soul
twisting,
twisting
in
liquid
spiral.
(C)a-alibaster

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"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.




[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-04-2001).]

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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

1 posted 2001-01-04 03:38 PM


Beautiful.
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
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2 posted 2001-01-04 03:43 PM


Very Beautiful   LOVE ELMO <3
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-01-04 04:34 PM


my drowning soul
twisting,
twisting
in
liquid
spiral.

oooh I loved this image.
I enjoyed it

Maree


I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2001-01-05 08:13 PM


Another powerful piece. I really like your work.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-01-06 08:57 PM


This was powerful, very good poem. A wonderful read!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Zyell
Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
6 posted 2001-01-06 10:30 PM


i love purple, we should all honor
our shadows, your poem caused
me to think of such ! well done

*S*
Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced

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