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forever_unforgiven2 New Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 4 |
Disfunctional Can't you see them When you close your eyes When you know you're completely and utterly alone When you're surrounded by a thousand faces and all you need is an ear I don't seem to know how to feel Sometimes I just want to kill Breath escapes my open lungs This numb body can't feel the tears I've locked myself in my own comfusion She's so close and yet knows the distance we hold I'm so cold I can't stand to be to close for to long Stop smiling at me I can't take it I can't open myself this way I'm trying to live her way Just stop walking away That's all everybody ever does Walk away You're giving me the option I choose to stay And be ignored I'm torn and searching for that needle to sow me right I'm in your cup you refuse to drink I can't help tasting sour The sugar just sunk to the bottom Through neglected hours Do I make you sad Because anger's just an extension of sadness And you're always mad I'll take my blame Can you tell me again that I'm a disgrace That I'm this way That this is my reputed face Everyday I get closer to jumping off this jagged edge Wouldn't make a difference if I was alive or dead Chances are to close to slim I've jumped in my own pool but I don't know how to swim Your words speak louder than the truth I know you don't believe in me Just that she'll be what I never could You would If I'm so invisible then why are you still grasping my throat I'm still trying to kill this fly that's buzzing around my brain I've got this broken glass sifting through my vains If you squeeze any harder They'll penetrate from the inside out Are you scared yet Do you want out I'm forcing myself through another day I'm trying to not walk away From everything I'm to scared to come home They'd never recognize me I'm trying so hard to be what I should but shouldn't is just me I'm sorry I can't forget Your words are my regrets I can't see through you I'm not sure I want to Disfunctional Stained in my own blood Deepening my own flood I've kept this part of me from you See my wrists I know you'd look away Sad but true I'm so tall I feel to small I've been found guilty Sinner Killer Winner from a cheater From the remaining blood will grow my wings And feel myself in slow motion falling Falling Disfunctionally Falling [This message has been edited by forever_unforgiven2 (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...this is some really great stuff. Welcome to Dark Passions.< !signature--> **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
very dark and painful. Gave me shivers gave me shivers. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
vertigos invitation unanswered never as the emptiness crushes all breath as to the pit follows one in The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
my god this is amazing i really enjoyed reading it. it gave me shivers and i lost my breath but it was amazing. welcome to passions and please keep writing "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WOW! (I'm speechless) Well Welcome 2 Passions!! This is a great poem--It gave me the shivers because it hit too close to how I too often feel ~HUGS~  SMILE ("When you smile the whole world smiles with you, when you cry you cry alone!") LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
...WHOAH....Extremely powerful, fantastic writting. This has such darkness to that most of us have felt; I don't think I could have put all that pure feeling in there no matter how hard I tried. Waiting to read more of your works..... Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". -- |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
I can't help tasting sour The sugar just sunk to the bottom I am in awe. |
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