Dark Poetry #2 |
The Emptiness Within |
Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
True love is but a painful gift For all the joy it brings For nothing twists your soul at night Like the heart that has filled itself with love Unrequited love brings tears It brings sorrow and brings pain It takes so much and then takes more And leaves but an empty shell I loved you with all mine heart and soul And expected no return Yet mine affections you cast off And tossed aside me, like some junk Mine fate I lamented upon My mind clouded and dark And here I sit, a living husk My emotions cold and stark |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! We all hope you enjoy Your stay here with us! Just beware of the curses floating around! Kidding! Just kidding!! lol Anyways ...... WELCOME! No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
I relate completely. For me, I have found that the emotion of unrequited love is so powerful that at times it outweighs the reality of "love". It must be the cruelest joke God plays. I have spent considarable time trying to separate these two events. The dream and the reality. Yet I am a dreamer...I still think wistfully of woman I have not seen in years. |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Great first post!!! Welcome to DP I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!! *Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living* |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Welcome to passions...wonderful words and idea behind them for a first post. Often have wondered myself which is worse...to love and truly love or to not love and wish we loved...love and pain seem hand in hand at times. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Loved it! It's true that sometimes love does hurt, but once you've found it, it's the best feeling ever. You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me - Everything To Everyone (E |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
We have nearly ALL been toosed out refuse of unbeleiving We again rise... The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Sometimes the true wounds are not shown. Welcome. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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