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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-04 12:29 PM


Look way down deep
Within my weary soul
You will see much pain
It has paid a saddened toll
For I have opened the door
To the firey gate
No longer looking for help
Or relying on such fate
Burning into the flames
Becoming one with the fire
Screaming with such passion
Or might it be with desire
Reaching out my hand
Longing for one more feel
Of the love that once surrounded me
Yet it broke the seal



No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-01-04 12:40 PM


Dont worry I am doing fine.  This was just some thoughts I had floating around in my head.  

Peace,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-01-04 09:03 PM


Hey you, I have those same feelings rather often, I guess its part of our "sensitive" nature.
Take care.
Sandra

DreamSeeker
Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72

3 posted 2001-01-04 09:28 PM


In the Moment known
Only to One
The DistancesReveal
The Distance Each has Yet to Know

Life Seeking


The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise


HiddenSparklez
Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
4 posted 2001-01-04 11:02 PM


Great poem, loved "firey gate".

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
5 posted 2001-01-05 01:31 AM


You always manage to keep me thinking  
to you

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2001-01-05 03:07 PM


Glad that everything is ok, great writing enjoyed.

Reaching out my hand
Longing for one more feel
Of the love that once surrounded me
Yet it broke the seal


It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

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