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Rose Petals & Thorns! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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Your love is like a rose, it's open then it's closed. Double-side, intertwining, slowly dieing & then reviving. When I think it's dead, it shows some life again. Roots are sprouting, no more pouting. Silky petals caress my skin. Must be gentle, delicate petal, falling apart in my hand, I've lost it once again! A thorn is stuck, blood is drawn, I have no luck, no green thumb. Sprinkle some droplets, to show that I care, it looks pretty lifeless, but the seed is still there. I'll come back tommorrow, my little flower, & bring you back, with all my power! ~Love is like a rose, it may die w/o the proper care! @}---}--- ~  LOVE ELMO <3 [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I want to give this to my ex-boyfriend but I couldn't think of a creative name & i think the poem still needs some work so please help me if u can Thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Thorn of Life, Petal of Death. It's backwards, I know, but it's just what popped into my head. And I loved the poem, by the way, and feel it needs no further work. But I understand the need to change things, so if that's what you want, go for it!!!! Great piece!  *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea thanx--I just want it to be perfect for him & the more i read it, the worse it sounds, i usually just write something down & never read it again, but this one i want to give away so i have to make sure it's perfect lol LOVE ELMO <3 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
our love hurts, then is great again soo i like the petal & thorns idea, but i'm not sure it fits the way u put it, but it did open up my mind a lil more so thanx--Hmm like Rose Petals & Thorns or sumpthin like that? LOVE ELMO <3[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 01-01-2001).] |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
lol. Thanx for making me laugh a little. I needed that. And you are very welcome... glad I could help expand your horizon of thought *Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living* |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx 4 all your help prevailing darkness--i decided to name it Rose Petals & Thorns in lack of a better name & i wanted to send it to him--so if any1 has sumthin better i'd like to know--thanx LOVE ELMO <3 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Elmo, love is a complex thing, enjoyed the poem. I am sure that he will love the poem also It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx Brian--Yes it is very complex, but I am determined & I refuse to give up LOVE ELMO <3 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Well I finally got the courage to send this to my ex-boyfriend--he hasn't told me what he thought about it yet, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed--lol LOVE ELMO <3 |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
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