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monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-12-29 12:03 PM


i  hate to fall in love
because i can never get back up

i want to try
to see if i can fly
to rhyme
with time
where my parents
pull their pants
down to realize
the size
of their mistake
creating a lake
with a mountain so bright
with blight


monique





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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-29 02:41 AM


I am so glad that they did meet,
and greet in language of the dove...
and if I knew the chemistry?
I'd be a brokerage of love.

No boundaries, no fences there,
for love? she floats upon the air...
and this breath she breathed, unique...
the whisper of a sigh..."monique"

monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
2 posted 2000-12-29 09:58 AM


"no bounderies, no fences....."
this is too funny serenity
that is what a few people told me
the reason why i fall in love with the wrong people is because i do not have bounderies
thank you for making me laugh

in the language of the dog, you should have said
forgive me for being so mean
but as soon Isis tells me what time school starts,
my heart might change for the better
(did you read Isis "Education of the Heart?)
i feel like a spoiled brat who can't get her ways

thank you serenity, for giving me a lift
WOOPS! i think we have a flat
i hope i won't be late for class

and i'll need to be chained to my desk
so i won't float out the window

serenity, all jokes done i appreciate your kind words






[This message has been edited by monique (edited 12-29-2000).]

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-12-29 09:03 PM


School starts when you are ready hon, after all you are your own taskmistress.  Though the student advisor can come if I'm needed LOL
You are not naughty (Grins) I think we all wonder why we were put here????  You have to find it out.  There is a plan there no one is made by accident.  You have a purpose, let's find it...I'm willing to try are you?
*hugs*
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-12-31 05:07 PM


Nice one here. I liked it a lot.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2000-12-31 09:32 PM


some day I know you will fall in love and it will be with the right person and you wouldn't want to get up, just stare at the skies and heavens. Enjoyed reading the poem, take care and peace  

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
6 posted 2001-01-01 12:49 PM


O Brian this was an exquisite comment, thank you so very much santa claus

Dopey_Dope i like you a lot too. SMOOOOOOOOKING!!!!!!!!

Isis, i was surprise at your comment, the part about "you have a purpose, let's find it....I'm willing to try are you?"
you are making me think hard
i have been wondering what is the purpose of my existence, just to take care of my children and i did not want that in my life and it is a battle for me to continue, i love them  with all my heart but my head cannot comprehend their existence being handicap needing full help with feeding and changing diapers like a baby at 25 and 17
i mean this is not a life, give me a break God why do we even exist?
Well good night everyone and Happy New Year


[This message has been edited by monique (edited 01-01-2001).]

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