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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing to it It's human nature to reach out if we like what we see. In this case I need to slow down and let her reach back to me. Must not try to hard to win a woman's affection. Her heart might be pulling in another direction. I may not be the man of the hour today but tomorrow I just might get my way. My phone is quiet. My pager is silent. Wait a minute she placed a call to let me know how I should move slow. To make me aware I must take my time to prove I care. Sort of a lovers passivity with future possibilities. But I can go thru it if she wants me to do it. I suppose perhaps I must to build trust She does seem to have a plan to put me thru it. Don't know when but let it begin. Hey this relationship is a piece of chocolate cake. Somehow I knew it. There's really nothing to it. Jameslee@August27,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hey! This is good!  A piece of cake, right?!  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Good to know somebody knows what to do... I liked it a lot!!! Great stuff. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
the quest for the meaning of a relationship between a man and a woman is an arduous journey...every day begins new questions and old insights... OR old questions and new insights... compelling work... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Taking it slow is the sensible thing to do!! BUT no matter the journey, getting to know one another, etc, is a pretty sweet cake and worth savouring and enjoying!! Wishing you luck and lots of icing hon *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
cake is good....yummy....like this poem! All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the nice responses...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hello James,...Nothing to it 'eh? . This was a candid expression in which I wholly enjoyed. I believe that time will allow for many things to be discovered and savoured. A good plan. I have faith that you'll succeed. Take care you. *Peace.[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
No one said that anything in life is easy or fair, my friend. I like your touch of sarcism to this one, it is very well expressed. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It was a piece of cake finding your meaning in this poem and I savoured every bite. Well done. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Spitfire, Marina, and Kethrey for the nice comments...much appreciated..James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I cannot lie...I love pecan pie...James |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Wow! this was a good one*S* I enjoyed reading it*S* If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes life is as good as eating a piece of chocolate cake...or even pecan pie...James |
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