Dark Poetry #2 |
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Night Aglow |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest ![]() |
There comes a final hush from the days crazy rush this deafening silence falls amongst these hardened walls The day is done I guess? I suppose it gave it's best for others they seem content Not me, I am not yet spent! My world comes alive at night colors of rainbows in my sight soon they vividly dance in my head reflections of what the day has said The last words when you fled before going to your steel bed boring as they may you had your final say I was left without a flame As usual, I was to blame fairies dance around in my eyes they abound I am not ready you see to go to that dream fantasy I am still full of fire steaming words of desire they leap off of my heart my world they impart unto the page they flow my night is now aglow! Alone with the words I write why can't they make me feel happy and free from fright? warmth is what I crave while awake tonight I am still stirring at this late hour maybe I need a cold shower! the ones I truly want are in bed maybe I should be there instead? Why can't I go to sleep rest in slumber so deep I feel the restless stir coming on I think it just might last til the dawn! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Alone with the words I write why can't they make me feel happy and free from fright? warmth is what I crave while awake tonight my favorite verse..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Excellent flow pattern here. I felt as if you were talking just to me. A very good read. Thanx, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
illusion, how well I can relate to the midnight musings. Great poem, well done! Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm with Kethry on this one, and I'll add that isn't it strange how you can handle 'things' during the sunlight hours but at night, that is when the heart and soul yearn, dream and fantasize often leaving you sleepless... Great stuff hon ![]() Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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