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a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-12-27 12:42 PM

In society's hidden horrors, we find the victems...
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She awoke with a sweat,
a dreamers end,
almost met.
She dreamt about love
And betrayal.
And butterflies,
Being killed.
She is only a child, a dreamer.
And yet she saw death.
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--Lil' Girl

"My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, and dies in violence."

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-12-27 12:47 PM

Oh man this was really good. Sad yet excellent write!

Mags

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-12-27 12:49 PM

a_little_girl,
dreams of betrayal, so often the truth of reality. Well written piece here.
write on
Kethry

Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

*prevailing*darkness*
Junior Member

since 2000-12-18

Posts 36
Port Richey, FL

3 posted 2000-12-27 01:36 PM

So sad... but very well written. Nice work!!

*Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.*

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-12-27 01:47 PM

Sad, but well done.
Peace
Sandra

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

5 posted 2000-12-27 05:36 PM

When I was writting this, I thought of other victims. Social victims, children that are warped by social values. These victims are too often overlooked, and abused.

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~~My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, writhes in hatred, and dies in violence.~~
Myself

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-12-28 05:52 AM

you write well...I hope to see more..*s

huggzz
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2000-12-28 09:51 AM

Excellent writing!

-Tier

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