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Dark Poetry #2

One time around

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-12-25 04:18 PM

Seeking me in this lonely world,

Surrounded by souls that do not churn,

Grasping my memories choking me down,

Killing me slowly one time around.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-12-25 04:41 PM

Boy oh boy do I know this feeling.
Well written

Peace,
Mags

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

*prevailing*darkness*
Junior Member

since 2000-12-18

Posts 36
Port Richey, FL

2 posted 2000-12-27 01:38 PM

Wow... Xeonox... every line in this small piece packs a punch... each as powerful as the one before. I like it!! Great job!!

*Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2000-12-28 05:54 AM

sighing...yes very powerful..I felt like saying once around is not enough..but like that it would be *s

huggzz
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2000-12-28 09:48 AM

"Sadness,
has been...
close as,
my next of kin..."

softly spoken eloquence...

enjoyed reading,
-Tier

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