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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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To have no heart, Nothing to be grateful for, Nothing to cherish, No dreams worth striving for. No valued friends To travel through this life with, Only darkness inside, No will to live or give. No light at the end of the tunnel, And because of all that, You cannot respect the same in me, I won't let you drag me down that's a fact. Don't kill the good, And fill the space with bad, Find a few treasured memories, And then you may not feel so sad. Friends, family and love, The secrets of spiritualism hidden inside, These are the things of value, Not winning, nor pride. I pray you find your heart, Fill it with love, worth and understanding, Instead of plotting my demise, Instead of useless planning. For I shall not weaken again, Will not let anyone kill my beliefs or self confidence, I will shine with all I've become, Never again will I give in to cowardice... *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very well written Isis. Easier typed than done, but its always worth a try (in my case)  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
without the heart. . . we are nothing. . . sometimes though. . . it's too late for some. . . excellent my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For I shall not weaken again, Will not let anyone kill my beliefs or self confidence, I will shine with all I've become, Never again will I give in to cowardice... sometimes this is hard to do..strong words to live by... thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
This is a great poem, but if it's a personal heart-emotion, you aren;t really convinced are you? You say the words but the reader (in this case me, ) thinks they are not believed fully. you write good....now make us believe you mean all of this or that whoever is saying it does..make the reader believe.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Isis, without a heart you are nothing, then it's a good thing you are all heart...for it makes you anything, you want to be!Dear one I soo love this piece. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks my friends Lana welcome to passions I do believe, perhaps that wasn't portrayed strongly enough. Once it was all nearly stolen from me, it will NEVER be even close again. This was a kind of affirmation as it were...Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Jeffyf Junior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 49Muncie, IN |
Stay strong, Isis. Like the poem says, never weaken, never give in.... Thank you for the encouragement. Excellent work. Jeffy |
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