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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
[profanity edited] Dedicated to my father or lack thereof When you speak to me, I know your intentions are good but your words fall like drops of alcohol upon an open wound burning into my flesh and slowly melting me away from the innermost part of my soul outwards leaving me hollow and empty inside. I am constantly amazed at how you say you love me and yet your actions betray your words. You have robbed me of my innocence and made me stand before you trembling, naked, and bleeding completely exposed to you, but somehow you cannot see the decay you have caused. I let a part of me open and you have crept inside only to consume me and silently witness my death. All I ever wanted was to make you proud and it's obvious as I sit here writing that I have failed horribly. What society would call a fatherless child ~ [profanity edited]~ the word haunts me and chills me to the bone. And there you stand in all of your glory oblivious to the fact that I am slowly dying and it is because of you. Hey there PD - I edited out the profanity in your poem as it goes against the guidelines. Thankyou Severn < !signature--> *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Holy! Wow! I am kinda speechless here! And trust me that doesnt happen often  I am sorry of the pain you go through. When something scars your life it is difficult to get past it. I hope writing helps you bare the painful imagery.Peace, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Dark_Kisses, thank you! I'm sorry, but I had to kind of chuckle at your response... I wrote this last night while smoking a cigarette and just thinking. I decided that I had better grab a pen and write it down, and you've made me glad I did. Writing always helps to heal the pain, or temporarily subdue it. Thanks again!  *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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