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Victim of My Own Stupidity
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Victim of My Own Stupidity |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
It comes from the inside I cant run away from my shadow Unless I become a child of the darkness But even when all the light is gone And I am all isolated and sealed The clean mind dicentigrates And now i am lost in a breeding ground for hate The core of me expands leaving a hallow center A never ending hole A hole that takes anything pure and regurgitates An equal and completely opposite negitive And the motives that brought me to this point Those motives have long since disolved like a piece Of delicious candy in my mouth Further irony to expand my hallow core No one comes to visit anymore I dont remember how to speak And the faces I use to adore and whom Of which promised to be here Are with all of you now I am the wretched "The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
All I can say is WoW and Ouch. This is powerful and touches the heart. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
xEE...First off, let me say "Great Read"...very well done. Secondly, it's not a matter of stupidity. We all make choices, some good, some bad...but they are just choices. Why we make them, good or bad, is a mystery, but all things happen for a reason. The choice you face now is, what do you do about it? For me, I just move on. I look for other places, other situations to make other choices.....and I just hope for the best. Few things in life are irreversible. There's still a world out there just waiting for you: Go live it. Hardrock |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Still haven't killed the cancer. Will we ever? Maybe someday. Well anyway, excellent poem and all that stuff.  In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
Wow. That was really deep... I loved it. Regurgitating all that is good and making it something completely opposite and furthermore equal... that just kicks me in the gut... I really feel this one. Wonderfully written! *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
you lost me with the first line??? what comes from the inside ??? what???? other than that the piece was moving. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
xEmperorEmber "I am the wretched" great line. Don't worry about the choices you've made, you can't change them but you can learn from them. I agree with Hardrock, move on with your life if you can. Writing helps. *HuGS* Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow I liked this one a lot. I am going to have to echo everybody else.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
thanks |
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