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Goddess of Imperfection
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Goddess of Imperfection |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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She cries to be his golden Goddess. Tall, proud, perfect Goddess. Unashamedly naked Goddess. Satin skin and hair of silk Goddess. Wine drenched lips, drops of passion speak his name Goddess. Eyes glow with desire, untouched by time Goddess. Rather the Goddess of Imperfection rises to meet him. Tentative, more silver than golden Goddess. Love overflows as a marble pitcher too full. She steps into his arms the magic touch transforms. The Goddess of Imperfection glows with the golden light of perfect love.. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh Cat... this is terrific!  "Love overflows as a marble pitcher too full" --- great expression! ~ Tara ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is just so touching, words escape me at the moment....but I love the transformation talents of love...applause to you on this, m'friend. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Very descriptive, beautiful imagery as well!! A fine piece here!!! Loved it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Another beautiful job Cat, you have a way of saying so much in so few words. Adding this to my favorites for sure. Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
i believe that as humans we all strive to be perfect.. but when we experience love, we reach perfection anyway because love is perfect.. nice poem, catalinamoon. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Cat, this is really beautiful, we all want to be just perfect for our loved ones... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, This one just shimmers.  Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow moonbeam, this is amazing!! really. what a masterpiece!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Beautiful, beautiful poem, Cat. I hold that imperfection is far more exciting than perfection anyway! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW Cat, an stunning poem, excellently written, in true love all imperfections become perfection. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, you know how much I love this one, and I just have to say that it is perfect for me right now!!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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