Dark Poetry #2 |
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Random Ramblings |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is just random ramblings about dreams I've been having, no form, hidden meanings--random ramblings Thunder roars, Lightining flashes, waves crash, Wind howls, Lights flicker, Phone goes dead, Power goes out, Heart breaks, Time stops, Words float, Power in envy, Moments linger, Tears fall, Screams echo, Flowers die, Darkness pierces, Days dawn, Hours soar by, I miss you, You left, I cry, I'm scared, You ran, I hid, We died, Us fell apart, She came, Every night, It's all the same, Storm repeats, Dreams reoccure, Nightmares replace, Twisting curtins, Wet hair, Running eyes, It's over, Red splatters, Shimmering quiet, Bottled pain, Smoking haze, Shotting sadness, Random ramblings "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
I liked it alot!! It was very random,i like random and the choas it causes kind of contributes to the overall stormy mood of this poem,i thought it was cool ![]() sammi "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
nice chaotic and stormy I liked it good going ramblings usually are random and thats the best way they can be |
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