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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-12-23 01:50 PM


Broken angel oh how you weep
With pain of lost love that's buried so deep
Every so often when you're laughing loud
The pain overwhelms, entraps like a shroud

Oh Broken angel you've lost love so true
But you should grieve most o'er the losing of you
I know this is hard, have courage, go on
Take pride in your passion, keep singing your song

Oh broken angel your song is now heard
By one more broken, by the cares of the world
I know by yourself you cannot go on
But together, we can stand and be strong

Oh Broken Angel please take my hand
I'll offer you comfort, from pain that you've planned
As I offer comfort in reaching to you
I have discovered you comfort me too



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
1 posted 2000-12-23 02:54 PM


First one that i have read from you and what a beautiful one it was*S*
Danyel

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-12-23 07:08 PM


Danyel,
thank you for stopping by and commenting.
Be well, and tell
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2000-12-23 09:47 PM


kethry
thank you so much for this poem.  i love it alot.  i loved it when you first showed me it and i love it more now.  you have alot of talent and you made this broken angel smile.  *hugs and kisses*  you are a very special person and i am glad that you are back.  hope to see you soon.  and thank you for the gift  
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.

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