Dark Poetry #2 |
How can I? |
liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
How can I love thee, when noone loves me? How can I give so much, when you give none at all? How can I care about you, when I don't even exist? "We can not truely love someone with whom we never laugh"- Agnes Repplier |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I know how stupid or arrogant I am going to sound by saying this but here goes, there are many of us out there can well relate to this, hell I know I can, but trust me to some people out there you more exist you matter alot. enjoyed reading and take care, "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm with Brian on this one. One many refuse to see, others will not. Find the ones that see clearly without having to be told... Merry Christmas Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
You are definitely worth a lot more than this ... Don't berate yourself too much ... Isis is right, look for those who love you just the way you are. ~regina. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How can I love thee, when noone loves me? How can I give so much, when you give none at all? How can I care about you, when I don't even exist? I NOTICED YOU today...written a while ago in springtime..but I did notice you today in Winter..for you... liqwidnik I noticed you today in the yellow branches reaching out calling to me, trying to draw that smile from my lips I noticed you today in the cool breeze as I stepped out into the winter-like spring air that took my breath away So calm am I inside, today almost as if I no longer exist no tears, no joy, no smile, no frown just straight faced, straight laced wondering where I have gone I noticed you today with your soft thoughts when written for all eyes and imagined they were for me, only Like my dreams, you come and you go at your will and I try to hold on to the feel of my sense of you, without you even knowing I noticed you today and for just a moment felt the warmth of your glow bathe me in sunshine filling my mind with your voice and my heart will be forever listening you were noticed today...by me..and I am sure you are noticed and will be by others..I have felt as if I don't exist many times this year..and actually at the moment I was feeling the same until I read your words and searched into my heart and past for those that comforted me once..I hope I have brought a smile to your face on this lonely morning ... huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I think I can understand this... Although, there are many who are aware of and appreciate your existence, when it isn't coming from the one who means the most to you, you can feel pretty inconsequential (sp?). You put quite a bit of thought into so few words.. (Now, to shake this utter depression!!) Well done! Sheila |
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