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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Jump back Don't attack Don't you see Alone I want to be? My life is complex Sometimes a wreck All I want is some room So I can listen to my inner tune Give me some space No need to race You will see my tomorrow Lots of time to borrow So relax and lay low Let's take it slow Life can be so sweet If our minds meet But if you smother You will need another Cause I am not the kind To get in a bind Life is too short to fret My heart is well kept So my darlin this is true I am endeared to you If you will understand my blue Let me have my mood! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
oh yeah!! I can relate to this one!! Well written with a GREAT message!! Loved it! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
EXACTLY! You just have to let off steam and have that mood sometimes Joy |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Illusion: I agree with you to a point on this poem. But, sometimes it can be hard to let a person be when you want to help them and it comes across as smothering you. Good luck keeping the mood and a blanced relationship together. Take care.  ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
YESSSSSSSS!!!! I love this! (You're definitely more polite than I am when those moods hit, though!! LOL) The point hit well! Sheila |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nicely done, flows well and makes the point clearly, an enjoyable read. Gloom |
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