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A World of Fraudulence
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A World of Fraudulence |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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He lives in a world of fraud and lies, A dark entity beginning his own demise, To live that way is something the good despise, And no one will want to comfort him when all alone he cries. Every thought selfish, evil and horror, Every indrawn breath wracked with blood lust pain, His kindred spirit - the Devil himself! Surely such a creature is insane? He knows no joy, Wouldn't identify even if he saw it, Laughter a forgotten memory, His looks belie his spirit. No inner peace, nor inner beauty, No thoughtfulness nor magic, Simply a shell of a human being, It is almost quite tragic. Scoffs at what he doesn't know, Slashes at what he doesn't believe in, Only his thoughts and beliefs are right, What others say ain't worth believing. God himself has turned away, He only has time for those who care, For those who live in his name, Not those life traveller's ill prepared. Such a waste, Such a barren lifeless realm, No happiness, no hope, no faith, The devil himself at the helm. I am big enough to recognise such fate, And I pray he finds his heart again, So he may know peace and happiness, And one day be called 'friend' again.... *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Isis...Sometimes your writings are so deep that my shallow mind can't grasp them, but I enjoyed this very much. As I read it, several people I know came to mind. Very good read. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hardrock, Deep meaning spiritual thankyou.. But as for writing and writer's you astound me! OK? And thanks, Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hopefully, he will my friend. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We all deserve the title of 'true friend' not just mere acquaintance.... Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nicely done, enjoyable, I found it easy to identify with your Subject in the poem, I know many of those type people. Enjoyed the presentation, center worked well, Especially with the line lengths you used. The rhyme flowed well. Gloom |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
such a sad life... no happiness, no hope, no faith... *sigh* i hope he can find these things as they are most important. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Sad i know someone this very way  Excellent poem! If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks my friends, I hope all people similar to he find their way again... Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very strong, Isis, its sad when we watch someone we care for become this bad. Take care. Sandra |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Like those before me.. I can recognize acquaintances in this piece. How unfortunate we don't see this until AFTER we know them! ! This was a wonderful thought-provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it.Sheila |
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