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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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fading into oblivion i remember the sun from the darkness i peer into my eyes you stare you do not recognise those eyes looking back at you as you go about doing what you do we are all just one till his work is done and you think this was all about you no differnet from all of them we are we us is us and in no one can you trust nothing left an empty soul all is gone before you're old grovel at the hand that bleeds from hell he comes and plants his seed devils spawn he does no wrong loved him a little then he was gone more souls to hold your lifes been sold now go and warn your children not to play outside too late and beware the fire burning inside hells iron gate Julie :) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi JulieAnn I enjoyed this very much, the last 4 lines really did t for me!  Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Very dark.. enjoyed the read. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great depictions of a life badly lived. The last four lines definitely made the poem. Great work Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great write, Julie Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Excellent! *S* If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all for your replies seems I have been inspired by the dark side of life alot lately......J Julie :) |
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