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Lonely Shadow
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2000-12-12 12:57 PM


This is just something because I loved my best friend... I mean truly loved.  but she doesn't even care for me as a friend anymore.  Because of the love I hold for her.  So, my tribute to my pain.

lying still, panic stricken
feeling nothing but sheer terror and pain
my heart aching... slowly crumbling
with the dagger of hatred thrust into my breast
the blood stained hands of the asassin
gently touching my cheek as I lie lifeless
with my last breath I utter "why?"
as I slowly slip into the dark abyss
I suddenly hear only four words
uttered from the killers lips
spoken with anger and disgust
"I don't love you"
with those words, I was delt the fatal blow
because no wound could ever compare
to the harsh words of a friend



To find love is to know true happiness... to hold the one you love is to hold everything... to look into their eyes is to see a glimpse of heaven... b

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-12-12 06:02 AM


This is so awful, so sad...I've felt something similar a couple of times, and can relate.

If you want to talk please email me...I'm frequently around lol...

hugs

K

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