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Little girl Lost |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
The Sweet little girl with the deep brown eyes...The long soft Curly Hair, and the warped secrets and lies.. Who really knows her? She barely knows herself Held captive and chained inside of her own self Waiting for someone to help brake her out.. She knows all to well that only she can help herself How can she do it? The walls are closing in She is about to be crushed... No one to blame, but her own fears She cries out for help but no one Can hear Will she be crushed by all the pain and Suffering? Will she get out in time? And open new doors The sweet little girl So helpless and lost Running out of strength to continue on her journey... Now the time has passed And she is laid to rest Her soul plays in the heavens that are covered in beautiful Meadows.... No worries, No fears, No lies to be told And a long awaited smile smeared from Ear to Ear Her soft curly brown hair has never Looked so beautiful She has never felt this feeling of happiness.... until This day her soul escaped and she finally closed her eyes and appeared at heavans gate.... [This message has been edited by MysticWonders (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Hi all*S* this is all new to me....so bare with me on it*S* hoping to get better at some point in time.....*S* |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I think this is an excellent poem...I hung on your every word. I know a girl with curly hair too, who had experienced similar pain, but her eyes were the color of blue. Welcome to DP, I can't wait to read more! ...beth "I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..." |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions!  Nice first post. Writting here gets easier with time. So yes, we shall bare with you! I hope to read more of your work.Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MW...Let me add my own welcome to the family here at DP. Very nice first post, very poignant tale here. Hardrock |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
*S*thanks all |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
MysticWonders, Welcome to passions, I hope you like it here. Good first post.I hope to read more of your work. Write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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