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MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY

0 posted 2000-12-11 07:36 PM





The Sweet little girl with the deep brown eyes...The long soft Curly
Hair, and the warped secrets and lies..
Who really knows her?
She barely knows herself
Held captive and chained inside of her own self
Waiting for someone to help
brake her out..
She knows all to well that only she can help herself
How can she do it?
The walls are closing in
She is about to be crushed...
No one to blame, but her own fears
She cries out for help but no one
Can hear
Will she be crushed by all the pain and Suffering?
Will she get out in time?
And open new doors
The sweet little girl
So helpless and lost
Running out of strength to continue on her journey...
Now the time has passed
And she is laid to rest
Her soul plays in the heavens that are covered in beautiful
Meadows....
No worries, No fears, No lies to be told
And a long awaited smile smeared from Ear to Ear
Her soft curly brown hair has never
Looked so beautiful
She has never felt this feeling of happiness.... until
This day her soul escaped and she finally closed her eyes and appeared at heavans gate....





[This message has been edited by MysticWonders (edited 12-12-2000).]

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MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
1 posted 2000-12-12 12:07 PM


Hi all*S* this is all new to me....so bare with me on it*S* hoping to get better at some point in time.....*S*
Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

2 posted 2000-12-12 06:50 AM


I think this is an excellent poem...I hung on your every word.  I know a girl with curly hair too, who had experienced similar pain, but her eyes were the color of blue.  Welcome to DP, I can't wait to read more!

...beth

"I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..."


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-12-12 09:34 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions!    Nice first post.  Writting here gets easier with time.  So yes, we shall bare with you!   I hope to read more of your work.

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-12-12 10:53 PM


MW...Let me add my own welcome to the family here at DP.  Very nice first post, very poignant tale here.  Hardrock
MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
5 posted 2000-12-22 12:01 PM


*S*thanks all
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-12-23 01:54 PM


MysticWonders,
Welcome to passions,
I hope you like it here. Good first post.I hope to read more of your work.
Write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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