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MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY

0 posted 2000-12-23 01:03 PM




I must confess the feelings
I have for you
Writing them down and sharing To The world
Just how much in
Love with you i am
My words that i speak so
Freely to you
Somehow get across
Mangled and untrue
This is the only way i know
How to Say those three little words
Hoping that you believe them
And not thinking its a
Part of another
Lie that i have told
You are My world and always
have you been
I am sorry for everything that has Ever happend
And this time i am hoping to
Make amends.
The words that escape from your
Lips come to me so harsh and
Cruel
But Know that i do understand
All the pain that i have
Caused you
With seven days left for our long awaited meeting
Let's start the New year off
right
And Never leave each other again
So precious you are to me
And how you fill my heart
I love you more then anything
and i will Promise to make it right!

© Copyright 2000 Danyel L Azar - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-12-23 01:24 PM


Very nice *Plea* here. I hope it all works out for you.
Keep writing,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


MysticWonders
Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
2 posted 2000-12-23 01:34 PM


Thanks! mags i hope it does to  
Danyel

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
3 posted 2000-12-23 03:58 PM


I hope everything works out for you in the end, good poem I enjoyed it
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