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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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Shards of words smashed against a wall, an exploding nova of raw emotions that had once been a systemized order of frangible letters, Cataclysmic dispersion Fiery projectiles of quasar syllables scatter haphazardly, littering sterile tile floor.. Cold, bloody rivulets of anger run thickly red to create a dark, staining puddle, seeping deep into cracks. © 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey there Koko... I noticed that this is a repost - you have another thread of 'Inferno' on page 7. Of course I'm not sure if you have unintentionally or intentionally reposted it so soon.  Basically - if you're going to repost it's a good idea to acknowledge it in the title in brackets. Also - reposting so soon in the same forum isn't a good idea - the Passions server is overloaded as it is...so every effort to avoid unnecessary threads is welcome.If you would like your work to be re-read feel free to bounce your posts back up to the top if you wish - saying thankyou to the people who have replied already is always a nice thing to do, and as poems don't stay on page one indefinitely it's not a problem... Cheers Severn |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
hmmm this was not an intentional repost..I did not recal posting this before. Perhaps i am unorganized in what is getting posted where and when. Sorry for the confusion on my part! I realize the vitalness of not crowding with reposting. i would be glad to delte this if you wish. thanks. Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Hey good thing you did because if you did not i would have never been able to read this. It is a fine piece, and i am glad i had the chance to read it. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOL...no worries... It crossed my mind you might have forgotten...easy to do in this huge place yes? K |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words reach deep and pull out emotions..I had to use the dictionary several times but I enjoy learning the use of new words..thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
Whoa. Very, Very nice. Great imagery. Can see it in my head. Ouch. The Shadow Hunter C'est plus qu'un crime, c'est une faute |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Well,I saw it clearly this way when it entered my emotions to do some damage! LOL And my temper is very very long in coming ,but lethal when it's lost. I scare myself when I get this angry. This was a very volatile write on the night I wrote it I needed help for me work this out in a postive way that would not be destructive.....thanks for your thoughts and comments! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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