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Isis - Dawn Goddess
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Isis - Dawn Goddess |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Moderator of the night Who's writ o'erflows with justice…right And stirring words to still the fright Enclosed, intrepid fawn Her faithfulness can …to life sway With her gentle namaste Encouragement along the way Mistress of the morn Encouragement is all she does Softly, serenely with no fuss To gift new hope to all of us Friend to those forlorn With no thought to her own shoes And how she's putting off those blues She creates a higher muse Comforts all folk forsworn Gentle loving always kind Reflected through her peaceful mind Keeps the world from deaf and blind Lifts up those new torn Mistress of serenity Gifting peace to you and me Balanced and with harmony Isis - Goddess of Dawn Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Nice imagery. I have a question though, in two places you have gift and gifting where it could/should read give and giving. Was that intention or just a typo? Asking cause it gave me pause as I was reading. Other than that, I enjoyed this. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dragonpoe, thanks for responding. In answer to your question, No in this instance I meant gift and gifting because they seemed to be gentler words.  Be well Kethry. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really nice Kethry...hey - I've used gift and gifting myself in the same kind of context. Not only are they gentler words, but also - gentler in concept. Isis will love it! K |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Severn, thanks for responding. She's deserving of all praise isn't she? live well Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry. . . You knew that I would love this one. . . it's a perfect description of her. . . she will love it indeed!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And indeed she does love it Kethry! *hugs* So glad to see a pic of you at last too!! I like to know who I'm talking to. This is beautiful and touched my heart and will be added to my 'poetry bible'. Thankyou so much my friend 'tis a treasured tribute. Namaste and love always, Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
lovely words, Kethry. She is deserving. so much. Smiles Joy |
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DarkAngel047 New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 2Canton, Mi, USA |
I absolutely loved this piece of work Kethry, I love your work. I also enjoyed "suicide note" to the extreme. I am only 15, and I'm in a creative writing class in school. We're making a book and it consists of poems and short stories and such stuff like that. i was wondering if it would be alright with you to publish your poem into that book. It's not a local, state or nationally published book, just within the people of our class room receive copies, but with your permission of entering your poem into this book, I would be more than happy to order a book for yourself. Please let me know. My e-mail is DarkAngel047@hotmail.com. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kethry these are very nice words for Isis...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey YOU!!! Ah! This is gorgeous! SoOo well done. Nice words Kethry. Full of truth. *Peace. *Oh yeah,....Hi!!! I can see you now!  . |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
After all we have been through lately hon, I just wanted to let you know this is even more special and precious to me now. *hugs* isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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