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Glimpses of a Rose |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hello yall i wrote this for a special person in my life. she has helped me out so much. and i owe her alot. she knows who she is.  i hope yall like it. Glimpses of a rose Hair of red eyes of brown not a truer friend could i have found so sweet, so caring so loving so true heaven sent down an angel the day they made you always there for me whenever i need a hand she always gives me hers and helps me to stand she listens to my probloms and lends me her shoulder to cry with her in my life this broken angel might once again fly you took me in your arms and you huggled me tight you gave me love when there was no love in sight your smile brings me happyness your laughter brings me joy the sweet sound of your voice i always enjoy i know most of your weak spots and you know all of mine you can make me melt with a single touch and i think thats just fine i know you are with another just remember this to be true i will always be here for you and i really care about you so i hope i made you smile and i hope i made your day i hope that one i can help you pull your mask away as i end this little poem only one thing left to say you are always in my heart even though you we are miles away... Jesse C. Jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm sure she already knows and is flattered Jess.. Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful Jesse, As long as you have a poets heart, you will be ok, I know it. Love you Sandra |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jesse I do not even know how to begin to reply to this poem. Thank you so much I am more than happy that I have been able to help you and guide you through troubled times. You know I am here for you whenever I can be. And thank you for being the kind and sweet friend that you are. You are an amazing poet with such a tender and beautiful soul. I am truely honored that one of your works would be for me. I thank you. Warm hugs... Tara |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
my sis, i know she is. thanks for the reply babe *hugs* talk to you soon my heart.sandra: awwwwwwww thank you. yes a poets heart i do have =) and i hope i do make it. *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
tara i am giving you a seperate reply. you dont have to thank me. i would do this for you over and over again if i needed to make you smile. you have helped me through alot of cold nights. both online and on the phone. this poem was the least i could do for you. *hugs and kisseS* thank you.love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Jesse...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very nice james as always..a talented writer you are.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
very sweet. Enjoyed With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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